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Gently Burning by ~drakeymonstrosityxo:icondrakeymonstrosityxo:

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What sanctuary could contain me?
A gentle wild-fire from the inside out
bound to burn this city down
but what's the trouble's bane?
because nothing is the same,
but I just can't quite guess right

is there any place here today
for me to find and stay
with diamond walls
that line the halls
made so I cannot escape
but who has heard of such a place

i guess it's safe to say
I'm not always stuck this way
some form of home will save my life
and keep my future free from strife
and I, though gently burning, will be free
©2007-2009 ~drakeymonstrosityxo
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It's about my short fuse.


It doesn't flow that well,
but not all poetry should flow
or else it all starts to sound the same, eh?

I hope you enjoy this or relate to this.

<3drakeymonstrosity
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~assassiner:iconassassiner: Dec 28, 2007, 10:30:57 AM
I REALLY like this Drakey.

especially: with diamond walls
that line the halls

i think thats cool because diamonds are the hardest gem.
*applaudes*

--
love has given me wings so i must fly
~drakeymonstrosityxo:icondrakeymonstrosityxo: Dec 28, 2007, 11:05:39 AM
why thank you :]
funny too. a lot of people seem to enjoy this one,
but it's the only one that just came out of no where.
I just starting typing and here it is.

^_^

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The worst part of falling is watching the ground close in:
but honestly, would you rather fall forever?
~musicxmirror:iconmusicxmirror: Dec 28, 2007, 11:17:28 AM
drake, right now i really hate you for being such a great poet. XD
i love this. i'm not going to say any more for fear of feeling stupid. :D;

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<3 val™
~drakeymonstrosityxo:icondrakeymonstrosityxo: Dec 28, 2007, 11:48:50 AM
haha, you shouldn't feel stupid.
If you need help with poetry or something
you can ask me and I'll help you out.

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The worst part of falling is watching the ground close in:
but honestly, would you rather fall forever?
~musicxmirror:iconmusicxmirror: Dec 28, 2007, 11:58:50 AM
NO!
cuz then, i'll feel extremely pathetic
for needing help with it. XD
blah.

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<3 val™
~drakeymonstrosityxo:icondrakeymonstrosityxo: Dec 28, 2007, 12:30:04 PM
haha, fine.
then... erm...
SCHMOO YOU ^_^

but seriously, as the chinese proverb goes:
"one who asks a question is a fool for five minutes. one who never asks a question is a fool forever." or something like that.

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The worst part of falling is watching the ground close in:
but honestly, would you rather fall forever?
~musicxmirror:iconmusicxmirror: Dec 28, 2007, 1:14:17 PM
schmoo YOU :0
i've never heard that proverb. o_O
GAH TIA KEEPS REPLYING TO MY TEXTS SO FAST.
you probably don't care and that doesn't relate to the subject at all,
but oh well. +D

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<3 val™
~assassiner:iconassassiner: Dec 29, 2007, 9:20:10 AM
haha. i love it when that happens.
kinda like an out of body experience.
:)

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love has given me wings so i must fly
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